Could I get some feedback on an email pitch I am sending out?
Email text below;
I saw your request for donations on Wish Lists |Wish Lists | Community Programs | Nonprofit Network of Southwest Washington and I wanted to reach out to you to offer my services. I could raise profit some cash for you to buy whatever you might need. If you are registered as a nonprofit, then I can get a $10,000 monthly grant for pay per click type advertising, like AdWords if you are familiar with the ads on right aide and top of Google searches.
I know we could raise some moneys for your organization without any upfront fee. We would only take our fee out of monies raised. So nothing g out of pocket. I am an independent marketing consultant, so the numbers below are my direct number. I am disabled and so don't have any fancy office and have to work from home as I have problems getting around as I can't drive. So I am available most of the time at those numbers. This is how I support myself.
If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to call, even late into the evening. Let me know how much your annual budget is, and or how much you need to provide the necessary tools and supplies for {entity}?
Any ideas would be greatly appreciated.
Tim Pears
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