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I'd love your feedback on my sales letter and also a mark from 1 to 5 on how good it is (5 - you wouldn't change a thing).
Target: 30-49 slackers feeling their time goes to waste, team managers, team members
Traffic source: own list
Offer: online course for $47

Title:
Discover Stress-Free Productivity By Habit Hacking Your Way To Success
The Automated Mind: Habit Hacks For The Busy Person
Subtitle:
30 Days Is All It Take To Create Long Lasting Habits Using The Methods Below
Use time-tested psychological techniques like P.A.R. and prompts linking to never forget a habit again!

SALES LETTER
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Have you ever found yourself struggling your way through life, unable to commit long enough to get to the end? You know that you have the potential, that you are smart enough to do it but somewhere between the start of your commitment and the middle of the road you find yourself abandoning it? And looking back, it wasn't actually a conscious choice, it was more of an unconscious saboteur.
"Progress isn't made by early risers. It's made by lazy men trying to find easier ways to do something."
Robert Heinlein, author of Starship Troopers

A long time ago in a college far far away I was abiding by Heinlein's "law" and "lazying" my way through university. The unconscious saboteur was my best friend, my all-around drinking buddy.

I won't bore you with a loooong story because I'm (still) too lazy to do that. To keep it short, I ended up unable to stick to anything long enough to feel a sense of accomplishment.

I FAILED going to the gym 3 times per week.
I FAILED getting out of the bed when the alarm went out.
I FAILED trying to make changes last.

And I wasn't alone in this. I was only one of the many people who failed to keep their commitments, especially the commitments to themselves.
When I finished college and I went joined the workforce my lazy lifestyle wasn't cutting it. After a lot of bad feedback, missed deadlines and a smelly apartment I did what I postponed doing through my whole life.
I made a simple choice. And I stuck with it! With it and with all the following choices I have made forever getting rid of my unconscious saboteur!
Below I present to you the secrets of habits that last
You probably know that the internet is full of techniques on how to create habits, how to get rid of them. All of your friends have advice and thousands of magazines are full of tips & tricks.
But if you look at them close enough, you'll notice that they are copied one from another and nobody actually tested them.
They are there because they sound good. And that's the only thing they do.
Developing effective habits is a challenge in itself.
My ex best friend and buddy, the unconscious saboteur was a fella' hard to get rid of.
In order to eliminate him, I studied hundreds of books and done dozens of mini projects to test my limits - from leaving a chocolate on my nightstand to publishing my jogging sessions on social media.
During my journey, I uncovered some deeply practical things like:
Habit linking, an effective strategy to remember your habit at the exact moment you need to activate it.
The 3 elements of a habit, the only theory that has ever worked for me. This can help you better understand your habitual actions and how to rewrite them according to your needs)
The SBS technique and how you can use it to keep yourself motivated over long periods of time
My name is Bogdan Vaida and I'm a former stressed, full time busy person turned stress-free time management trainer.. Now I help people live a more fulfilling life despite their laziness.
And here, I'm ardently presenting you, my life's work, The Secrets of Habits
This course is here to guide you into implementing effective, down-to-earth strategies to achieve your goals.
This is not a listing of hundreds of techniques.
In this course we talk about practical things, the things that work, all tested by me after over a decade of personal involvement in the field of personal productivity.
All of the techniques come from personal experience.
Here, you'll find out how to link habits using the P.A.R. technique to never forget them again; how to find the willpower to lose 22 pounds in 2 months; how to exercise daily, without losing your momentum.. and much much more. You'll get useful bonuses, bonuses on improving your performance, hacking your motivation to never leave you again and willpower *jedi mind tricks*.
The Challenge!
After you've internalized the necessary strategies for breeding long-lasting habits and gone through the practical exercises, then you are ready for the secret challenge.
In this challenge you'll have to implement a simple habit starting from the first day. At the end of your first month, if you've implemented the habit daily, you'll win a prize and a place in the Hall of Fame.
Note that this is not a guide for eliminating bad habits (though some principles found here might be useful in doing just that).
This guide offers practical strategies to get your first successes.
And after the first few steps, the others will come easily.

Calin Iepure, entrepreneur and consultant in business strategy, moderator of Business Days and facilitator for the Bootcamp University was very enthusiastic after he went through the course:
"Hello! I'm Calin Iepure. I met Bogdan Vaida some 4 years ago during the weekly meetings of Timisoara Toastmasters. Since then I was introduced to his educational programs and I've seen how they make our life, my life and yours and the life of those who participate in them, a lot better. With their help I managed to better organize my time and become more productive. If you, right now, are interested in personal development, want to increase your productivity and motivation, I strongly recommend Bogdan's online courses."
Mihnea Popescu, manager at Atos International knows me personally from one of the live trainings this course is based on.
"Hello, my name is Mihnea Popescu and I live in Timisoara, where I had the opportunity to meet Bogdan Vaida. I also participated in some of his courses. I am very glad that I did. At the beginning I was a bit skeptical about the perspectives he presented, because I was used to a completely different lifestyle. I was determined to believe in him blindly at the start and to continue to do so if I had results. In doing so, I applied his advice and techniques and I realized I had incredible results. I asked myself "what's happening?" I continued to listen to him and apply what he said, even though I sometimes disagreed and thought it wasn't suited for me. Gradually, I started to understand that there were certain perspectives that I would never have thought about. Participating in his courses helped me a great deal. I recommend them to you and in the end you'll see how happy you are you've been part of them."

So how much for this special training?
Just $47.
That's right, for only $97 you can receive instant access to the complete package with step-by-step examples on how to develop long lasting habits using time-tested psychological techniques.
Why only $47? Because I want to put this course in the hands of as many people as possible. I want it to be easy to get and quick to deliver.
And if you need to justify spending $47 on mastering your productivity, then skip eating out one single night this month.

Click the button below and you'll be taken to our secure payment page. All you have to do is Enter Your Regular Details and complete your investment...
Join this course now and create your first habit that will never abandon you!
OR
Join this course now and habit hack the way to your success!
See you in the private section.
Bogdan Vaida, The Habit Cracker
PS: You need to check the fourth video in the course. It will give you the smallest change you need to make to maintain momentum for anything you do (including going through this course till the end).
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  • Profile picture of the author ewenmack
    Sounds like it's...

    A Slackers Guide To Get Sh!t Done

    So let's get straight to the point
    and call out what it does.

    A slacker will appreciate getting to the point
    fast, so he doesn't strain his brain.

    Got it?

    Best,
    Doctor E. Vile
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