Care to critique this web page of mine?
Click here >> Home - Northern NJ Vein Treatment
I am doing the copywriting and web design and SEO on all jobs.
I'm new to copywriting which is why I joined this group...
If anyone would like to rip this web page to shreds... please have at it. Thanks in advance.
P.S. Female perspectives are particularly helpful since vein treatment patients are mostly women.
P.P.S. These doctors are extremely conservative clients and hate hypey writing... ie. offering guarantees and other common techniques.
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