Breaking a well-known copywriting rule ...

by Raydal
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On a recent Facebook update I posted the following questions: Why
do people want to live? Why are people afraid of dying? What is
it about life that makes it want to continue?

Some FB friends indicated that they were more concerned about
what happens to those left behind after their death, than what
happened to them personally. Well, if death is the end, then
there is not much concern you may have for yourself?

This raises the question on how those marketers who deal with
after-life issues sell their products? The funeral and life
insurance business come to mind. I mean, how do you sell a casket
to a living person? Yet we know that tens of thousands of seniors
make final arrangements before their demise so the sale is being
made.

When I study the marketing and advertising of such companies
there is a common thread: they always sell on the premise of what
happens to the family members who are left behind. And this is
not by accident as I would explain in just a moment.

You see, a general rule of thumb in marketing is that a
‘prevention product’ is harder to sell than a ‘cure product’
. For
example, it would be easier to sell dental filling than cavity
prevention toothpaste. The reason is not hard to see. When the
prospect has a problem which affects him personally, then it’s
easier to get his attention. When the prospect doesn’t presently
have the problem, but is asked to prevent the problem using your
product, then it is harder to imagine.

But marketers have found that there is one exception to this
“rule” and that is when the problem can affect his loved ones.
Those who sell funeral products found that it is easier to make
the sale when the marketing is based on the dismay brought about
by the prospect’s death on his wife and children if money is not
provided to meet these expenses. As a Florida resident for the
past ten years, I’ve spoken to many seniors who have spent
upwards of $25,000 on their final arrangements soon after their
retirement. Most of these retirees were sold on the same premise
of not leaving these expenses for their loved ones to carry.

Prevention products are some of the toughest to sell and if your
product or service falls in this category you must have already
experienced this. For example, if you sell a software that
prevents websites from being hacked, then most webmasters are not
too concerned about website security until after they are
hacked—then your product becomes a cure.

One way to get around this hurdle would be to sell your
“prevention” product as a cure. The trick here is to agitate the
potential problems to the point that the prospect can already see
himself having the problem and see your product as a cure. So
picture the inconveniences and money lost to a website that has
been hacked and all the damage to his business and time lost in
recovering data. If you can get him to imagine this with enough
intensity, then it would be ten times easier to make the sale.

Traditionally it has been difficult to get men to see their
doctors just for a physical checkup. Every concerned wife knows
that it is not easy to get us men to see a doctor, unless we are
gripping our chest and collapsing to the floor. But just one
heart attack and the attitude changes dramatically!

So if you study the successful marketing strategies of those who
sell health product such as vitamins and other diet supplements,
you’ll notice that they picture as graphically as possible the
diseases their products are assumed to prevent—clogged arteries,
lost memory, lost virility and lost hair. They pile on all the
latest statistics on lower nutritional value of modern food and
use of the dangers of using genetically modified food, all in an
effort to get the prospect to see their product as a cure.

Now if you add in a dose of human nature it is not hard to
appreciate that it is a lot easier to take medication for, say,
diabetes than it is to eat a low sugar diet. It is lot more “fun”
to eat the heartburn inducing meal and then take the Pepsid than
it is to avoid those food.

Whatever you are marketing, evaluate whether it falls in the
general category of a cure or a prevention, and keep in mind that
preventions are hard to sell with the EXCEPTION of when you can
visualize the problem as happening to the others around the
prospect rather than himself.

So that water filter for the home would sell better if the
marketing to the parents focuses on the children’s health, rather
than the parents'. The roadside vehicle assistance would sell
better to a husband if marketed as help for his stranded wife and
children, than for himself having broken down on the highway.

The bottom line is that prevention can sell effectively if you
focus your marketing on others having the problem, rather than
your prospect.

-Ray Edwards
#breaking #copywriting #rule #wellknown
  • Profile picture of the author not mark
    Solid post, thanks for sharing.

    Same with insurance companies, you see those tv ads showing havok and houses burning.

    For some reason a lot of people skip the whole analytical part of copywriting, better to take a step back from time to time and look at the big picture.

    Cheers,
    Mark
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  • Profile picture of the author [RyanMilligan]
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    Nice post but I kind of get the feeling that it's common knowledge. I mean that in an inoffensive way as I read your posts on here often and know your a knowledgeable copywriter.

    I'm meaning don't we all write copy in that sense?

    Health product ----> Live longer, happy family -----> more fulfilling life

    MMO -----> Make enough money to live a comfortable life/not worry about money/take care of family/ -------> Family are happier less stressed, you are less stressed, you can both enjoy nice thing


    Maybe it's just me thinking like that. Nice post anyway I'm sure that the content will never have crossed lots of peoples minds.
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    • Profile picture of the author Raydal
      Originally Posted by [RyanMilligan] View Post

      Nice post but I kind of get the feeling that it's common knowledge. I mean that in an inoffensive way as I read your posts on here often and know your a knowledgeable copywriter.

      I'm meaning don't we all write copy in that sense?

      Health product ----> Live longer, happy family -----> more fulfilling life

      MMO -----> Make enough money to live a comfortable life/not worry about money/take care of family/ -------> Family are happier less stressed, you are less stressed, you can both enjoy nice thing


      Maybe it's just me thinking like that. Nice post anyway I'm sure that the content will never have crossed lots of peoples minds.
      No it's not common knowledge. If you think it is then you missed the point
      of the post. So you're right that I wouldn't be making a post like that as you
      mentioned--that IS common knowledge.

      The "rule" is that cures sell better than prevention. This post is about
      an EXCEPTION to that rule.

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      • Profile picture of the author [RyanMilligan]
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        Originally Posted by Raydal View Post

        No it's not common knowledge. If you think it is then you missed the point
        of the post. So you're right that I wouldn't be making a post like that as you
        mentioned--that IS common knowledge.

        The "rule" is that cures sell better than prevention. This post is about
        an EXCEPTION to that rule.

        -Ray Edwards

        Where is that 'rule' exactly?


        Everybody has a unique style of writing - every successful copywriter anyway. Thought process obviously goes in to what they write/how they write it/what they are saying.

        The marketer in Florida you speak of, can you show me where you found that?

        Your post is filled with good content but I missed nothing when there is a ridiculous amount of variables about the why and hows of human behaviour in sales.

        I don't mean to disrespect you (I'm not trying to anyway) but you are speaking as though that 1 marketer can be some kind of scientific proof.
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        • Profile picture of the author Raydal
          Originally Posted by [RyanMilligan] View Post

          Where is that 'rule' exactly?
          It's a well known fact of human behavior that people seek cure for a
          problem more readily than prevention for that problem. A cancer
          victim will spend hundreds of thousands for a cure than hundreds
          for a preventive diet.


          The marketer in Florida you speak of, can you show me where you found that?
          Not a special marketer, just those who sell cemetery plots.


          Your post is filled with good content but I missed nothing when there is a ridiculous amount of variables about the why and hows of human behaviour in sales.

          I don't mean to disrespect you (I'm not trying to anyway) but you are speaking as though that 1 marketer can be some kind of scientific proof.
          I'm not speaking about any one marketer, but making a general statement of
          which those marketers were an illustration. So it was a deductive statement
          rather than inductive.

          I don't take your response as personal; just an open discussion.

          -Ray Edwards
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  • Profile picture of the author [RyanMilligan]
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    Yeah I can totally see where you are coming from now.

    We will have to disagree about there being general 'rules' in human behaviour. Sex, wealth, power, attractiveness, pride are all things the majority of nearly any niche target market want but there is a 100 ways to tackle selling to the market.

    Fat people don't eat McDonalds and drink Coke Cola all day cause it's fun. The problem is they are lazy and are in a routine. 'I don't care that I am fat. I am happy.'

    99% of the time that's going to be a lie. Don't sell them a fast easy workout that will is SUPER EASY & WILL GET YOU RIPPED IN NO TIME WITHOUT EVEN TAKING 10 MINUTES OF YOUR DAY.

    Sell them a ' How to break habits a of a lifetime and get yourself out of that rut you've been..thinking.. about crawling out for years now. '

    Then go on and sell them a real workout. They have underlying issues and making more problems for them isn't always the case.

    I could argue both sides some days to be clear. You might be right about the whole prevention before problem thing but then we can go down the stream of addicts. Drugs, food, spending.. and the 1000's more. Addicts a real hardcore one will not seek prevention before problem but that opens another market of products we could discuss I guess.
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