Is some typeof phrases make sense in text?
Hello!
This phrase at the beginning the list of features (this is extension for online shops):
The rich-features system to create the highway to (hearts of) your customers.
I do not like this type of phrases when I am marketer. But if I'm buyer, I think it's an invitation, "heyyy, welcome, look!".
Is this phrase make sense or not?
upd
Perhaps it is better to make the phrase "over 50 features for usability" or "51 features to configure the system"
But I think many people are tired... it is "5 Steps ..." or "7 Tipes ...".Or it is working? Who have really cases?
For example "It is really cool" x+1 and "It is 5 steps help you" x+10 or x+100
This phrase at the beginning the list of features (this is extension for online shops):
The rich-features system to create the highway to (hearts of) your customers.
I do not like this type of phrases when I am marketer. But if I'm buyer, I think it's an invitation, "heyyy, welcome, look!".
Is this phrase make sense or not?
upd
Perhaps it is better to make the phrase "over 50 features for usability" or "51 features to configure the system"
But I think many people are tired... it is "5 Steps ..." or "7 Tipes ...".Or it is working? Who have really cases?
For example "It is really cool" x+1 and "It is 5 steps help you" x+10 or x+100