Care to look at my website?
On Wednesday I have an ad going out on a podcast to 20 thousand married women. The talking points for the ad are
- Great Parents Teach (Join these parents)
- Do You Know What To Do When Your Child Is Struggling? (Fear)
- Text the problem and you have the lesson plan that night (imagine yourself using it)
I just want to reinforce the website to make the message clear and consistent throughout. If you could look at my website, I would really appreciate it.
TeachByMe | Helping parents teach.
Everything on the site has been made by me, and I've been learning as I go, so I really appreciate the feedback. I've done a lot of reading (The Science Of Advertising, CA$HVERTISING) and am trying to implement different practices.
Right now I think the main thing I need is a picture of a mom and child doing school work together, and a list of the benefits. A lot of what I tried doesn't look good though.
Regardless, tell me what sucks, and what copy I should change throughout. I'll update it as you recommend, and update you all on the results of the advertisement.
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