I would greatly appreciate it if you guys could give me some feedback on my copy. I'm completely new to copywriting. I will be selling a dog costume on a shopify product page and use Facebook ads as traffic source. I've censored some words as to not reveal the product. Thank you!
Here it goes:
''Hey there! It's me, your dog. (title)
I have a little something I've been wanting to tell you. I really love it when I get to strut around wearing the (censored) Costume you got me recently! It feels so comfortable, so soft and it fits me perfectly! Having (censored) (censored) (censored) makes for a hell of an entertaining (censored), everywhere I go.
I enjoy entertaining you, your friends, family or any other onlooker by wearing the costume, but I secretly enjoy all the attention and love I get from it waaaayyy more. See, everywhere I go I turn heads. I put a smile on people's faces and they think Iâm so cute and adorable because of wearing the costume. Well, not only because of the costume of course. Iâm handsome and cute without it too you know. They give me so much attention and love that itâs pretty hard to have a bad day.
I know you want me to be happy. So please, have me wear the (censored) Costume more often!''
Hey there! It's me, your dog.