Can I please get some feedback on my website copy?

by Theodosios 2 replies
Hi Everyone,

I'm about to launch my website (personal development audio product)
Could I please get some feedback on the copy?

Site is: http://www.mindfullifemethod.com

- Is the headline compelling? Is it clear from the get-go, what I'm offering?

- Is the content attractive, believable, different from the myriad of other products?

I'm kind of struggling narrowing things down, I'm afraid it may be too general?

Any tips would be great!

Much Appreciated,

Theo
#copywriting #copy #feedback #website
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    Yep, great copy.
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    Sorry, yes, the site is offline.

    I'm trying to delete this posting, but I don't see an option to do so.

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