Tyro humbly requests a copywriting critique
first of all let me say that this is a great forum and I'm very impressed with the advice given by the experienced copywriters here.
I've only recently started to learn about copywriting and am still quite a novice. This is why I humbly ask the members of the forum to critique my first sales page that I put online a few days ago. I'd be really grateful for any advice you could offer on how to improve the page. I know I'm asking a lot for my first time posting here, but I was so impressed by the helpfulness of the members here that I just decided to go ahead with it.
At the moment there aren't any testimonials on the page, but I'm working on that already.
The page is arabicgenie [dot] com
Edit:I did some quick fixes to the page, but the original site is preserved for reference at arabicgenie [dot] com / index2.html
Thanks a lot for the time you invest in advance!
All the best,
Max
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