Please Look Over My Landing Page

by Sour
5 replies
I'm still new at this, so I suspect numerous things will be wrong, but please let me know what I can do to improve it. I haven't started promoting the site yet because I wanted to get all of the basic errors fixed before I put everything in my own hands and split test everything to death.

BTW, I know the links don't work. I just didn't want my CB analytics to be affected.

Thank you, guys!

learnhowtosing.net
#critique #landing #page
  • Profile picture of the author jukeboxhero
    Uh wheres the opt in box? For starters?
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    • Profile picture of the author Sour
      Originally Posted by jukeboxhero View Post

      Uh wheres the opt in box? For starters?
      Is every landing page supposed to have an opt-in box or something? I was kind of just focusing on making sales right now, since I'm new to all of this.
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      • Profile picture of the author Collette
        Answer this question:

        "Why do ordinary people take singing lessons?"

        Hint: It's NOT because they're afraid that they're damaging their voice by using the wrong singing techniques.

        Make a list of the answers.

        If you need help with the answers, go to your local karoke (sp?) bar and ask a few folks why they come there to sing.

        Let me assure you, you will not hear one single one of them say anything about damaging their voice.

        Take the answers and have another go at this letter.

        Takeaway lesson: Know your prospect. Learn their desires. Learn their fears. Understand their motivations. THEN write your letter.
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  • Profile picture of the author Ross Dalangin
    1. Add a voice ads on your page similar to my reviewsscript.com which is created by a fellow warrior Ginny Culp or any sample of background music while your visitors are reading your sales copy.

    2. You should display your name and why they will trust you. Are you a singer or music arranger?

    3. Provide a sample.

    Ross
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