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Sales Page Author Need

by Michael Forey
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I need someone who will review my salespage and suggest a different head and sub head so I can A/B test.

Also would like comments - minor tweaks - suggestions on my sales page. I think my bullet points need a little work. I can't afford a comlete rewrite right now. Just looking for a quck review.

Please PM to let me know turn around time and price.

See the email product in my signature.

Thanks
Michael Forey
#author #page #sales
  • Profile picture of the author Success Galore
    Yes I can do it for you in the next 35 to 48 hours from now.
    Can you pay me $77 for the job?
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    www.a-zofaffiliatemarketing.com

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    • Profile picture of the author AndrewCavanagh
      The beginning of this sales letter is truly horrible and you really should know better if you can write a decent email.

      Be specific in your headline and your opening.

      Use specific, compelling facts and figures.

      For example:

      The Amazing Secret To Selling A $2,500 Product...

      Could you be just 10 automated emails away from charging your prospects 10-100 times as much and making $2,500 sales instead of $20 sales?


      Or something along those lines.

      Also consider starting out your sales letter after the headline with an interesting, compelling story from your own experience about email marketing.

      Kindest regards,
      Andrew Cavanagh
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