Please Critique My Sales Page
I am a Newbie and I just did my 1st sales page and would really like some feedback.
Here is the site: Debt Settlement 4 Idiots
The site has been up for 3 days and I dont have a list so there are not any testimonials. So I can only tell my story of how it all worked for me, etc.
If you want to give me some tips on getting Affiliates too that would be great. Its through paypal.
But let me know what you guys think and some pointers.. I'm sure it could be better.
Thanks a lot for the help in here it is super appreciated!
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