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Copy Writing Newbie

by brooks28
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Hi, I am new to internet marketing and copy writing, I have a website called The Home Swapper - Council House Exchange and Home Swap Community. and would really appreciate it you could offer some feedback regarding my sales pitch. I am open to all critisism positive and negative because I very much want to learn this valuable skill.
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  • Profile picture of the author brooks28
    I would really appreciate some feedback regarding the copy on my home page at The Home Swapper - Council House Exchange and Home Swap Community.

    Thanks
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    • Profile picture of the author Collette
      Since many of us here are based in the U.S, you probably need to explain what a council house exchange IS and why anyone would want to do it in the first place.

      'Cause unless we understand what you're trying to sell, to whom, and why, it's hard to be very helpful...
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      • Profile picture of the author OnlineMasterMind
        You need to grab the readers attention and immediately tell them:

        1) what this is all about
        2) why they should care.

        This is usually accomplished with a headline

        I'm guessing that "home swapping" is more common place where you are and thus, people will be able to figure out what's going on faster than I did but you still need to test a good, well written headline.

        The headline can often be the biggest leverage point on your site and can even boost your response by over 1000%. So, I'd start there....
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