give me your feedback on my very first sales letter...
this is my very first sales letter i've ever written...
it did okay conversion wise but then i stopped sending traffic because google slapped me like a two dollar crack whore
obviously i know that once i get real traffic the only way to know for sure what works is to test, but i'd like to start out with it as strong as i can...
that being said if you see any blatant weaknesses or parts that make you doze off feel free to let me have it. i have no ego and i know i can benefit greatly from your wisdom.
thanks in advance.
here's the link:
Tap Into the Gold mine of Hot Women!!!
it did okay conversion wise but then i stopped sending traffic because google slapped me like a two dollar crack whore
obviously i know that once i get real traffic the only way to know for sure what works is to test, but i'd like to start out with it as strong as i can...
that being said if you see any blatant weaknesses or parts that make you doze off feel free to let me have it. i have no ego and i know i can benefit greatly from your wisdom.
thanks in advance.
here's the link:
Tap Into the Gold mine of Hot Women!!!
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Thanks
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