Help!! Need a sales page critique please!
I need a critique on a sales page, can you please tell me what do you think and how I can improve it.
It would be mostly appreciated.
Thanks :-)
>>>My sales page
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Andrew Gould
Me
Now, Here's The REAL DEAL:
Either I make YOU at least 10 times of what I charge YOU OR
I'll Write YOUR Sales Copy AGAIN Till YOU Make MUCH MORE Than THAT. Guaranteed*.
*Terms & Conditions Apply. Email me at ronak[at]ronakshah[dot]name right now.
Now, Here's The REAL DEAL:
Either I make YOU at least 10 times of what I charge YOU OR
I'll Write YOUR Sales Copy AGAIN Till YOU Make MUCH MORE Than THAT. Guaranteed*.
*Terms & Conditions Apply. Email me at ronak[at]ronakshah[dot]name right now.
Now, Here's The REAL DEAL:
Either I make YOU at least 10 times of what I charge YOU OR
I'll Write YOUR Sales Copy AGAIN Till YOU Make MUCH MORE Than THAT. Guaranteed*.
*Terms & Conditions Apply. Email me at ronak[at]ronakshah[dot]name right now.