Having a tough time with writing my headline...
Now, I'm totally stuck!
My new site is totally being recreated into a membership site that comes with a wealth of knowledge, my contacts and exact resources how I earn on average 15-25% PER MONTH. That's not a typo and I've been doing this for years using several different investments...from Automated Robots to very unconventional and outside of the box methods.
This last year I cleared about 700% in totally passive income that I'm going to share with the public. Other than showing people my tax returns it's hard for people to believe. But it's the truth and I've been doing this for years and I've been very close to the vest with exactly how I pull this off every year. I'm not a genius, but I've been blessed with very wealthy friends and also have been an investor since I was 19, starting my first company.
I know that it will come down to doing alot of split testing, but my problem is that I don't want to sound like some pie in the sky or get mixed in with the "To hard to believe crowd" and I don't want people to just gloss over the headline and be so overboard in my statement/Headline.
There's so many ways to go and I end up with a headline that's way to long and try to touch on everything. My main keyword(s) are passive investing/Passive Income/Wealth Generation/Forex Robots and that's just the tip of the iceberg.
Enough said... Here's what I've come up with:
"Semi-Retired Offline Millionaire Reveals All About How Anyone Can Make 15-25 PERCENT EVERY MONTH on their own money!"
"Discover the EXACT secrets to how I earn 15-25% PER MONTH on my own money using 100% hands free and passive income strategies...Full Access to my Golden Rolodex, Contacts, Resources and MORE!"
"Discover How I Legally Rob Banks and Make 15-25% on Autopilot Per Month...!00% Totally Passive Income Streams, millionaire investor reveals how anyone can do it to, NO EXPERIENCE Neccesary!"
Well? Which if any strikes your curiosity the most or would make you want to read on?
Feel free to criticize or add a subheader if you think of any.
Thanks Everyone!
Scott
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