Help Me Optimize My Squeeze Page

The layout itself has the elements in the right spots but...(you knew it was coming didn't you!)
...Clean up the formatting - right now the opt-in form is a mess in my browser
...Is this product targeted at beginners? If so - some may not even know what the acronym PLR means!
...If the product is for Pros then you're product isn't unique enough to capture attention
...Your headline lacks 1) Specifics, 2) A Unique Promise, or a hook that captures the attention of a specific type of customer
...Start with the benefits before you ask for the opt-in

And those benefits - hmm...
...The benefits are internet marketing "generic" these could be said about any product in the IM space. You need to make these benefits specific and real for your specific reader
...I like the highlighting of the specifics - but you need to connect them with a real tangible benefit

Last -
Where's the proof? Even though is a squeeze page - it still has to make it over the B.S. bar.

Stan

The words 'leverage' and 'secrets' are good.
The phrase '...earn thousands of dollars every month...' sounds quite weak and too cliche-ish.

How about, "Stop Wasting Countless Hours On Research! My Secret PLR Profit Report Reveals How You Can Create Your Own Virtual ATM Machine That Prints Money On Demand By Leveraging The Hard Work Of Experts"

Firstly, '...wasting countless hours on research' is something every writer/marketer can identify with, so you're catching their attention.

Secondly, '...virtual ATM Machine that prints money on demand...' paints a picture in their minds. This creates impact. Also, whenever you write a noun (like ATM machine), try to use an adjective (like virtual) before it to increase its effect. You could be even more aggressive by using adjectives like 'cash-spitting' if you don't mind its crudeness.

If you feel that the picture of an ATM machine ejecting money is too common, try thinking of another picture. You get the idea - paint a picture in their minds.

O yeah, and 'Experts' always sounds better than 'Others'

Hope this helps!

All the best.

Okay.

I've changed the headline and the benefits.

Let me know what you guys think.

New Page:
PLRNicheClub - Cash Generating Private Label Rights Products Delivered Monthly

Old Page (For Comparison):
PLRNicheClub - Cash Generating Private Label Rights Products Delivered Monthly

I looked at your squeeze page on Chrome
the html design is acting up

Your email and name boxes are out of wack!

I use Google Chrome more than Firefox-
On firefox it's almost perfect but the email and
name boxes are not completely aligned even on Firefox...

Check all other browsers:
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The Headline is Great:
"New Secret PLR Profit Report Reveals How You Can Turn Your Computer Into An On Demand Cash-Spitting Machine By Leveraging The Hard Work of Experts"

People say to keep your Headline @ 17 words or less but I think it's GR8


The Background color is perfect- (converts better)
The Graphics are great...

Blind Curiosity is in full effect in your bullets-
but the one that says-

"Much Much More We Can't Reveal on This Page"
makes me feel like you are witholding stuff from me...
Like I'm being cheated...

Just put "And much much more..." This invites me
to know "what more is there?"
or test the 2 to
see which converts better...

On the submit bar- Test "Instant access to Free Secret report"
Against what you already have: "Send me My Free Report"
Both would be Great, but I'm willing to bet, Instant access
will work better...

Aside from that it looks Great- Love the book cover

P.S. See if your CURSIVE signature works... Again test everything...

@ Olivier Vasquez,

Thanks for the tips. I will def take into account some of what you said.

Here is my problem.

1) I see the formatting error in Chrome as well. If I add another pagebreak it fixes the issue in Chrome but the gap in firefox looks too large. (in IE its okay...)

2) I can't seem to find out how to align the text boxes equally. My web form just seems to want to act up.

Does anyone know how to fix the above two issues?

Jeffrey,

Thanks for your honest feedback.

I may convert it to video OR offer a video as an unannounced bonus. That is a good idea.

Small issue: Report is only 15 pages. Since it's a "short" report, I don't want it to seem as it's not valuable (since it is...). Could it be detrimental to list the page amount in this case?