Nice copy, pity about the headline...
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Of course it can still be a lot better but I've got a decent conversion rate now and it's time to focus on increasing traffic.
There's just one sore point... my headline! I've tried dozens and dozens of headlines and, according to Statcounter, a full 75 to 85% of visitors leave within 5 seconds. The current headline is running at a 80 to 83% departure rate. It doesn't matter what I do, the rate always remains in the same range.
If you figure only 15 to 25% of my visitors even read more than the opener, I've got a pretty phenomenal conversion rate!
Some people have advised me, "Never mind about this statistic, it's only the number of sales that count". This makes sense up to a point but if I can hook more people at the start I should convert a lot more. Currently I don't even get a chance with most of them.
So what's the problem? Even I stay on most webpages more than 5 seconds unless it looks like total junk. Anybody got any ideas or suggestions?
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