Constructive criticism please?
Ive created a new sales page and I would really appreciate some feedback.
When sent to my list the conversion was about 20%.
Now I've launched a PPC campaign, it hasnt converted yet although the average time on the page is over 5 mins. I think maybe people are reading the start and therefore the title and initial copy is good however my call to action is weak.
About 30% are clicking the link at the end.. maybe Im not building enough trust?
Anyway would really appreciate some feedback. Have just realised I cant put the link in as I've not posted enough yet.
Happy to email the link
Thanks
Andrew Gould
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Andrew Gould
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