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Please review my page

by amirkhan
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Dear Warriors,

I am new to affiliate marketing so I need your help. I have three affiliate products (all three online guitar learning tools/websites). I am planning on bringing traffic into my squeeze page, develop my own "guitar enthusiasts" list and follow up with valuable content.

Once lead is captured:

1. My auto responder will follow up with free guitar learning videos (that is one incentive for them to provide their name and email).
2. Immediately after submitting their email address, they will see another page where I will list the three affiliate products which links directly to affiliates.

I need your help in reviewing my "squeeze page". Also any comments and suggestions on my strategy is welcome. Apparently I cannot post a link yet, so the squeeze page link is in my signature.

Thank you.
Amir
#page #review
  • Profile picture of the author Alexa Smith
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    • Profile picture of the author amirkhan
      Alexa thank for your inputs.

      I do intend to have specific domains, however I wanted to get going by testing by using some sub-domains for the time being?

      I think you are right about it being too wide, I will try to adjust it. Regarding the picture, that was the best image I could use without requiring further editing. My target market is primarily 30 yr+ men who have been playing guitar for a while. So, I feel you may be right about the picture being "off-putting". I will try to substitute the picture with some new ones.

      Once again thank you for your observations and suggestions!

      Amir
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      • Profile picture of the author ben565
        i would put the bullet points down the left side of the page and your opt-in needs to be above the fold so that it can be seen as soon as people visit your page,prefferbly in the top right of your page.I would make your opt-in stand out more with colors that stand out and your call to action button should be yellow as this has been proven to convert better.

        Also try split testing your headline and your call to action.

        Where is the privacy,about,contact us & disclaimer pages? without these google will slap your site for sure.

        you also need a page title,meta tags and meta keywords
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        • Profile picture of the author amirkhan
          Thanks travlinguy & ben565 for your suggestions! This is very helpful for me.
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  • Profile picture of the author travlinguy
    Overall, a nice looking page. I agree with Alexa that the page is pretty wide. It's also left justified and I believe it would be better centered.

    One other thing, you say that your opt-in people are directed to a page with three offers. Without actually seeing the page I'd say three is too many. Again, without knowing what you've got, I'd go with a single offer. And you should make the opt-in page specific to that one offer. Either that or maybe you could do a test where you rotate the three offers individually to see which sells better. Good luck.
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  • Profile picture of the author cdtboxhdr
    You should center content and allow the text to go down a little further. The content is too wide.

    I would also split-test different photos. the caption says all genres - but your photo clearly says "rock."

    You also have an error in your sign-up box - the box goes through the privacy statment (i'm running IE8).

    Your testimonials are not aligned - they seem out of place based on where the word "testimonials" is.

    Hope that helps..
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  • Profile picture of the author Kevin-VirtualProfitCenter
    This is a good start, but I think you can create a page that converts better by offering to show them something amazing--just one thing--after they sign up. I would probably give away an amazing technique in a video on the page and then encourage them to sign up to get part two.

    In most cases making a specific promise to give them one answer beats a more general promise like you have here.

    The promise you make needs to be based on a felt need in your prospect group.
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    • Profile picture of the author amirkhan
      Thanks cdtboxhdr & Kevin-VirtualProfitCenter...
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