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Need Feedback on My Video

by Jack Bastide
2 replies
Hey Guys,

I created a Powerpoint Video for a home based
business that I have been Involved with for 5 years

(Yeah its one of them MLM things)

I'd like to get some opinion on the Video

I already know it's long (its 10 minutes) I use is as
a screening video to weed out uninterested people

Ive never done one of these Videos before so any feednack
is appreciated

here's the video

The Six Month Miracle

Jack
#feedback #video
  • Profile picture of the author TheGraduate
    this sounds like a really nice business/opportunity, it really asks for a professionally made video squeeze page from topminisite(d)c website or covercorp(d)c website. This video seems find to me, but I would go all out if I was you and have a voiceover pro guy remake the whole thing.


    edit/adding: oh, I would also get rid of the required phone number and full name in the opt-in form, most people run away when they are asked for their last name and phone number
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      • Profile picture of the author TheGraduate
        Originally Posted by MarkAndrews IMCopywriting View Post

        Too, you might be on a bit of a sticky wicket... if either of those two characters take exception to being made to appear as though they are endorsing your product, when in actual fact this is not the case?

        Those two are way too big to care about a couple of his pics or pics of their books being used in a promo video (all he was doing was quoting them), have you heard of sponsordaddy(d)c? that program really uses those two guys, it actually uses video interviews from their own personal DVDs. They do not care though, they are actually happy if you mention their names as long as you are not scamming people.
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