Tell me everything you think.
I would like a Sales Page Critique.
I hired someone to write this Sales Letter and I want to know what you guys think.
To me it seems fine,but i'm not much of a Sales Letter Expert.
Tell me everything you think about it please.And I shall change everything that needs changing.
P.S English is not my first language so forgive me for my grammar mistakes.
Thank you very much for your responses.
Andrew Gould