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The Best Sales copy??

by Maddi
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Hello Copywriters,

Is this the Best copy? Does it sell?

Its an ebay ad for a car but look at the visitor count at the bottom of the page?

Having a hard day? chk this link and thank me later :-)

2005 RENAULT CLIO DYNAMIQUE 16V BLUE on eBay (end time 23-Mar-10 15:10:07 GMT)

Someone has actually set up a facebook fan page for this add too.

p.s. I have a similar thread on the main forum but since its related to copywriting thought might as well post in here.
#copy #copywriting #humorous #sales
  • Profile picture of the author Maddi
    I think Malcolm[metronicity] has pretty much the same twist to his copy lol

    I've seen your wso copies, unusual to say the least. loved it :-)
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    • Profile picture of the author The Copy Nazi
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      Originally Posted by Maddi View Post

      I think Malcolm[metronicity] has pretty much the same twist to his copy lol

      I've seen your wso copies, unusual to say the least. loved it :-)
      I'm from the "I don't give a sh*t school of copywriting". Works for me. Somebody just called me "The Louis CK of Copywriting". LOL. So I posted a YouBoob vid of the guy doing Improv. Starts slow but gets better and better. That guy is "out there". Have a look. In the comments on my WSO. [now all i need is for some narc to give me an infraction for "blatant self-promotion" so for Gods sake dont buy anything or be tempted to read the rubbish. Just scroll straight down to the bottom and watch the vid. And I bet your Missus rushes into your den to see why you're laughing so loud.]
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  • Profile picture of the author Maddi
    Originally Posted by Ken_Caudill View Post

    Has it sold?
    He has got a few bids and this is an 'actual' auction so yea he will eventually sell it.
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  • Profile picture of the author Kevin-VirtualProfitCenter
    What is the best sales copy? Here's my definition: When the words are so persuasive that even after the customer has purchased and feels disappointed by the product, they buy again and again even though their future experiences are not any better.

    That's how I know I am one of the greatest copywriters alive today--I seduce my wife several times a week. Each time she is disappointed by the product, yet I am still able to "sell" it to her repeatedly.

    THERE CAN BE ONLY ONE!
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    • Profile picture of the author Maddi
      Originally Posted by Kevin-VirtualProfitCenter View Post

      What is the best sales copy? Here's my definition: When the words are so persuasive that even after the customer has purchased and feels disappointed by the product, they buy again and again even though their future experiences are not any better.

      That's how I know I am one of the greatest copywriters alive today--I seduce my wife several times a week. Each time she is disappointed by the product, yet I am still able to "sell" it to her repeatedly.

      THERE CAN BE ONLY ONE!
      Don't know if its sad or funny but I really lmao
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  • Profile picture of the author Richard Garcia
    Hi Kevin .... I started reading your post, I thought yea he's right! lot's of social paths have this ability...I'm not name calling now. You would have been better of thinking of a less personal example "seduce my wife several times a week Each time she is disappointed by the product, yet I am still able to "sell" it to her repeatedly." I would say that when it comes to seducing a wife your act needs to be as good or better then your copy!
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  • Profile picture of the author Rezbi
    Here's my definition of the best copy: So good even I buy it... and it's my own product.
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