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I'm Not Going to Pretend I'm a Copy Expert

by configthenet
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I'm finally getting enough views to my site configurethenetwork dot com to where I feel comforatable changing my main page to increase conversion rate. I'm new to IM completely and this is my first project and my first product. When it released a month ago I was able to sale 12 copies within the two weeks but my sales dropped completely the last two weeks.

Could any one give me some good honest critique AND pointers on what I should fix. Before I added the video, I was making sales with just the copy, wondering if I should try removing the vid first and test for a week or two?

I'm willing to put in the effort to make my sales page better right away!

configurethenetwork dot com
#copy #expert #pretend
  • Profile picture of the author The Copy Nazi
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    Originally Posted by configthenet View Post

    I'm finally getting enough views to my site configurethenetwork dot com to where I feel comforatable changing my main page to increase conversion rate. I'm new to IM completely and this is my first project and my first product. When it released a month ago I was able to sale 12 copies within the two weeks but my sales dropped completely the last two weeks.

    Could any one give me some good honest critique AND pointers on what I should fix. Before I added the video, I was making sales with just the copy, wondering if I should try removing the vid first and test for a week or two?

    I'm willing to put in the effort to make my sales page better right away!

    configurethenetwork dot com
    CCNA Labs : Configure the Network I'm too shagged out to comment. Had a quick look. Good start. Needs work - especially the formatting.
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    • Profile picture of the author Ross Bowring
      From a quick glance...

      Maybe...

      Imagine what it would be like if you could walk into the test center for the Cisco CCNA Exam and know with 100% confidence that you will pass the hands on CCNA Simulations that's going to be presented to you.

      Could become...

      Imagine walking through the door of the Cisco CCNA Exam test center... 100% confident you're about to pass (and easily) any CCNA simulations they throw at you...

      --- Ross
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      • Profile picture of the author configthenet
        Thanks guys for the advice so far, I generated 1 sale yesterday finally after two weeks of in action before I made any changes. So before the video I made on average 1 sale for every 200 clicks. With the video I made 1 sale with every 700 clicks.

        I removed the video and I changed the way the mail subscriber works this morning. Before it was a static Aweber box that required the user to scroll down the page and sign up. Now it's a pop up that happens after 20 seconds, it fades nicely onto the webpage. I'm going to test this out for a week or two and post my results!
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        • Profile picture of the author jukeboxhero
          Just out of curiosity what's with the crazy formatting.


          Many certified Cisco CCNA Exam takers (including myself) will agree that the toughest challenge on the exam is the actual simulation labs themselves. What if there was a lab guide out there to go over every lab topic you needed to know in order to ace the CCNA Exam?

          Be careful of making customers aware of your competitors if they don't already... What if they didn't even know there were other options? Now you've sent them off looking...Not only that but there's no congruency with the bullet above....

          What if there was a lab guide? in the first then in the second your asking if they noticed all the other lab guides?
          • Have you noticed that most Cisco CCNA lab books are "How To's " rather than actual scenarios that test your knowledge?
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