Looking for an honest review of squeeze page.
I'm not a copywrite expert and mostly hire out to do my squeeze and landing pages. I like the internet marketing niche, so I'm 100% involved in this market instead of automating a business like I do in my other niches.
I wrote this squeeze page last night and would like a review of the copy. Any suggestions would be appreciated. I still haven't run any traffic to it and won't be making changes until I get a couple hundred views.
I'm not sure if it's too gaudy with the yellow background to some text. I don't want it to be over board.
My target market is new to intermediate marketers. The systems I teach can be used by the newest newbie, but can be extremely useful for those that have some internet marketing background.
Here is the description of my target market I wrote the other day:
Hi. My name is Steve. I'm 25 years old. I'm 6'0 tall. I have a medium build and like to keep healthy. I'm wearing flip flops, brown cargo shorts, and a loose fit T-shirt. I live in a 2 bedroom apartment with a friend. I've been involved in internet marketing for 6 months and really enjoy working for myself. I've had small successes here and there but nothing lasting. I'm afraid if I stop working every single day, the money will stop coming in. I want all the toys like nice clothes, fancy cars, and gourmet dinners. More importantly I want the time to enjoy it. My family and friends tell me to get a real job and there's no longevity in what I'm doing. I work so hard but it seems I barely make it by. I'm starting to agree with them but I try my best not to. I know I'm close to what I want at times, but I also feel I'm so far. I'm scared everyone is going to be right about my ventures. I'm scared I will get stuck in a 9-5 job working for someone half as smart as me. I won't let that happen. I won't give up until I've made it in this business, but if things continue like this for so long, I can't see myself being able to make it. I'll never admit my defeat and I will keep my head held high to keep trying. I have the knowledge to make and internet business work. I just haven't found my stride yet. I know it will come, but I want it now. |
I was just going to make it a 3 minute video and an optin at the bottom, but the weather here in Nashville has been horrible lately. I am shooting the video from my condo balcony that overlooks the city. I need a nice day to shoot this so it looks good. I'm trying to build that sense of success even with my background in the video. Once the weather gets a little nicer, I will be adding that video to the top of the squeeze page, or I might just A/B test the copy and the video.
Also, I made that header graphic. I'm no expert at graphic design but I like doing it. Is it stupid? I went with the sky picture to give the effect of "sky's the limit" type deal.
Once again any suggestions are greatly appreciated.
Travis
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