Selling the dream to the 'average joe'
I have been working really hard on my sales letter I am using for an IM product I am trying to take mainstream.
I have two versions of my sales letter.
One for people who know about affiliate marketing
One for people who know nothing about making money online(average joe).
This is the one for the average joe:
Dan Brock's Profitzon - Amazon Affiliate Marketing Revealed
I am having trouble selling the dream.
Can anyone give me some suggestions on how I can improve my language use so that it appeals more to the average joe who has never made money online in his/her life?
Do you need to sell the dream more if you are talking to the average guy?
Any tips are welcome, and much appreciated
Thank you for your time.
-Dan Brock
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