can you please review my capture page

It reads like a million others. Nothing very exciting or compelling. The scarcity warning at the top isn't very believable. You might try a short paragraph before the bullet points with some 'bragging' on how much you've acheived or how much money you've made with your amazing strategy or whatever it is. The one interesting point in all of it is the part about siphoning traffic. You might consider making that your hook and build mystery and intrigue around it. That's what I'd do. Good luck.

Oh, even brand new WF members can create a sig file and have live links in it. It would make it easier on people willing to review the page and you'd get a little exposure for your program. Until then here's your link:

ezinearticle traffic blueprint capture page | MattAdamo.net » Blogging, Internet Marketing...

Here's the link for easy access:

ezinearticle traffic blueprint capture page | MattAdamo.net » Blogging, Internet Marketing...

I think you'll get better quality feedback if you wait until you put up the capture form - that way everyone can see how it fits with the rest of page.

So far, though, it seems to me that there's room for improvement.

1. Your pre-header warns me that this traffic blueprint will not be available for long. I don't believe you. Scarcity is important, but this is the IM industry - and I imagine that at least some of your prospects know all about squeeze pages and list-building.

If you want to claim scarcity, you need to give a reason why. Alternatively, you can get a php deadline-countdown script and use that.

2. Your headline is a bit wordy. It can be cut down. For example: "traffic and visitors"? If you're worried your prospects don't know what "traffic" is, then you're targeting the "complete newbie" segment of IM, and you probably need to educate them a lot... not to mention that those who don't know what "traffic" is almost definitely don't know what "article marketing" is.

Anyway, I'd go from here:

"Discover How I'm Able To Drive An Endless Stream of Traffic And Visitors To Any Opportunity From This Exclusive Article Marketing Blueprint"

To here:

"Discover How I Drive An Endless Stream of Traffic To Any Web Page With This Article Marketing Blueprint"

And even then it's not great. It has no uniqueness, no hook, no credibility element (except you saying that you do it yourself).... and it's a claim that anyone even barely resembling your ideal prospect has heard every single day for as long as they've been online. You're going to have to step it up. If you don't have a compelling proof element, you need a hook of some sort.

3. Your subhead jars. It's a bit patronising, if I'm perfectly honest. Maybe it could somehow slide if you'd established credibility in your headline... but I'm not sure you have.

Even if you shifted person... "It's how I stopped struggling to grow my business"... you'd convey the benefit without sounding like you're talking down to your prospect (and without the prospect being able to reject the claim).

4. Your bullets are so very mundane. "Siphon" is good but the rest aren't. Perhaps that sounds blunt... but they too come across as completely generic and with no compelling and unique curiosity factor.

Making these changes is just the start, though. There's much that can be done to make this page convert as well as possible.

Good luck.

Gil-Ad

Don't sweat the scarcity thing too much with the opt-in page. Save it for your actual product. You can always say that the report or whatever it is you're offering is going to be a paid item in the near future so YOU BETTER FREEKIN' GRAB IT NOW before I start charging what it's actually worth! But you have to do it with a bit of style to make it fly.

Again, don't worry about that right now. Get the main points in order first and by then another genius from this board will come up with a scarcity angle. :rolleyes: Good luck.