I need help with my first copy ever! (Warning, sexual material)...
This is Riccardo Gueli.
I need help with the copy on this website for my report "The Secret Potency Report". Basically, this is the first piece of copy I had ever written, and I would really appreciate it if someone here could offer some critique.
WARNING: The website, while INSTRUCTIONAL, deals with sexuality/adult material, so be fore-warned if you are easily made squeamish by this sort of stuff.
The website is at potency.instantbreakthroughs.com
Moderators: If the website is offensive, of this post in anyway violates your T&Cs, then I will gladly remove this post and maybe privately ask some members for help via Private Message.
Thank you all.
Riccardo Gueli
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