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Which Headline Is Better?

by helper
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I was reading Ted Nicholas interview on a paper recently and I discovered that he spent a lot of time on headline that the entire sales copy. He also said he writes about 250 headlines before choosing the best one for his sales copy.
I was motivated and something tells me to rewrite my headline for this sales copy
Copywriters, please help me decide which headline is better for my sales page bearing the name of the domain in mind.

This is the headline I currently use

Now, let me show you... "How I make $200 Daily on Facebook...With No Website, No Blog, No Advertising And How You Too Can...100% Guaranteed!"

Brace Yourself For A Brand New Perspective Way Of Socializing and Making Money On the Most Visited Social Networking Site...Just Give Me 3 Minutes And I'll Show You The Amazing Insider's Secrets Of How To Do The Usual Thing You Have been doing on Facebook And Still Make Staggering Amounts Of Cash...
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These are the new headlines I have come up with


If you really want to make money on facebook, then let me show you...

"How to Make $247.91 Daily on Facebook on Complete Autopilot... Starting With Zero Setup Costs!"

Brace Yourself For A Brand New Perspective Way Of Socializing and Making Money On the Most Visited Social Networking Site...Just Give Me 3 Minutes And I'll Show You The Amazing Insider's Secrets Of How To Do The Usual Thing You Have been doing on Facebook And Still Make Staggering Amounts Of Cash...
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Now, let me show you...

"How To Have Your Own Share Of Facebook Fortune Each Time You Log On To Facebook...Even On Complete Autopilot!"

Brace Yourself For A Brand New Perspective Way Of Socializing and Making Money On the Most Visited Social Networking Site...Just Give Me 3 Minutes And I'll Show You The Amazing Insider's Secrets Of How To Do The Usual Thing You Have been doing on Facebook And Still Make Staggering Amounts Of Cash...
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Facebook is worth $11b...
"Facebook Gold Digger System Reveals Million Dollar Loophole That Will Make You Up To $247.91 Daily On Facebook On Total Autopilot...Starting With Zero Setup Costs...100% Guaranteed!"

Brace Yourself For A Brand New Perspective Way Of Socializing and Making Money On the Most Visited Social Networking Site...Just Give Me 3 Minutes And I'll Show You The Amazing Insider's Secrets Of How To Do The Usual Thing You Have been doing on Facebook And Still Make Staggering Amounts Of Cash...
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Please which headline do you think is better and will work best for the domain name?
If you can suggest more for me, I will appreciate it a lot.
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