Which Headline Is Better?
I was motivated and something tells me to rewrite my headline for this sales copy
Copywriters, please help me decide which headline is better for my sales page bearing the name of the domain in mind.
This is the headline I currently use
Now, let me show you... "How I make $200 Daily on Facebook...With No Website, No Blog, No Advertising And How You Too Can...100% Guaranteed!"
These are the new headlines I have come up with
If you really want to make money on facebook, then let me show you...
"How to Make $247.91 Daily on Facebook on Complete Autopilot... Starting With Zero Setup Costs!"
Now, let me show you...
"How To Have Your Own Share Of Facebook Fortune Each Time You Log On To Facebook...Even On Complete Autopilot!"
Facebook is worth $11b...
"Facebook Gold Digger System Reveals Million Dollar Loophole That Will Make You Up To $247.91 Daily On Facebook On Total Autopilot...Starting With Zero Setup Costs...100% Guaranteed!"
Please which headline do you think is better and will work best for the domain name?
If you can suggest more for me, I will appreciate it a lot.
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