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Can someone help me?

by Andy Money
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Hey

I recently launched my product at VideoMarketerPro - Learn how to drive traffic and earn cash with video sharing sites!

Any tips on what to do with copy? I'm really at a loss. Sometimes I am able to get creative when writing copy but it's just not working this time around. Any tips at all would be really, really helpful because I believe this is an excellent and really unique product but I just need help pitching it I guess. Thanks in advance!
  • Profile picture of the author LeannaLuck
    Perhaps you should think about writing it in more of a "press release" style. Try informing your audience about the product rather than "pitching" the product to them. If the product is unique and fills a need, giving good solid information about it will allow it to sell itself.
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  • Profile picture of the author UniqueMind
    Hey Andrew,

    Here are few tips you might consider

    - Use words that create feel and anticipation, at very beginning of the sales copy. Words such as secretly, killer, never before etc etc will do

    - "Drive (and maximize) traffic straight from video sharing sites" could be written as .."The only one tactic that gurus use to drive massive targeted traffic to their site's ..be prepared to be amazed as your sales explode!"

    - Get testimonials

    - Offer something really good for free to capture email address ..I cant stress the importance of this one

    - You might consider changing the font ..simply turn off the bold and put something that your competitors are doing well with.

    Hope that helps ..

    best,

    Steve
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  • Profile picture of the author travlinguy
    A couple of things...
    Your headline is very long. I'd stop it after "...stacks of cash." The rest is too much for the header. Also, there are spelling, punctuation, and grammar issues throughout so getting someone to proof the page would be a help.

    As for technique, this offer would lend itself to a story. Stories work well in some situations. They almost always follow the same progression. You start with a person who has a problem. In this case the person has little or no traffic or is spending too much to get the traffic s/he has. As he stumbles along the IM highway he discovers VideoMarheterPro, buys it and gets locust swarms of new traffic.

    People love stuff like this because they're able to relate to the poor schumck limping along. And if it worked for him (you can make him as lame as necessary) it'll certainly work for me!

    Good Luck
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