Kindly review and select the best copy from these 2
I am just pasting very short snippets as I have yet to complete the whole sales page rewrite.
It would be better if you can state the reasons why one is better than the other. Your feedback will be greatly appreciated.
Here I go -
Copy 1:
Instead you'll be sitting back, relaxed - savoring the thrill of having qualified, interested prospects contacting you - ready to give you money... instead of your competitors.
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Copy 2:
Even if there is not a creative bone in your body, you can now easily create red-hot, professionally written sales letter within fraction of the time it usually takes, and get it delivered to your customers and prospects fast...
...without spending one penny on an expensive copywriter!
Just think - no more cold-calling grunt work again!
Imagine the pure pleasure of sitting back, totally relaxed - savoring the precious thrill of having qualified, interested prospects eagerly knocking on your door - ready to give you money... instead of your competitors.
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Can anybody share their opinions on the above 2 pieces. Thanks
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