Lots of traffic but no conversions
I have just joined the Warrior Forum and this looks like a great forum!
This is my first attempt at writing a sales letter for an ebook. The ebook is to help people who are suffering from UTI. Little competition in this niche. Please, I need honest (don't worry about hurting my feelings) feedback.
I only had 7 sales in the first 3 days and then it dropped off to nothing. Something must be wrong.
I get plenty of clicks per day but I am not getting any conversions. I have changed a few things (headline, offer, guarantee extended etc.) but with no success.
The sales letter is at: uti-gone.com
Thank you for your help
Manie
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