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Sales Copy ==> H1t Me!

by Ludovic
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Hi guys,

I just have a thing for asking questions all the time regarding a topic. Even, if I were a high authority in a field, I would still ask questions... With the many copywriting talents that differentiate throughout this forum, I would like to know, if anyone can offer suggestions to my salespage.

It would be mostly appreciated.

Thanks, and all the best
-Ludovic

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#&gt #> #copy #h1t #sales
  • Profile picture of the author Adam Roy
    I feel like that page is a bit overwhelming...

    It's giving me too much of a rahhhh vibe...too much info I think.

    I feel like I would have to "look around" that page to find what I was looking for...or what I may be interested in.
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    • Profile picture of the author Loren Woirhaye
      I think the main problem with PLR sites like this are that
      the people who know how to launch and market PLR
      products already have a lot of them and don't need
      your membership.

      The other group, PLR newbies, mostly don't know where
      to start and have never sold their own products, so
      the real issue is "how do I set it all up?"

      No PLR membership letter I've read addresses the issue
      of how a newbie learns to quickly put a product on the
      market, crossing the t's and dotting the i's.

      See - it's not that your product doesn't have value -
      it's that for those who know how to use it, it will tend
      to be a redundant purchase. For those who don't,
      well, they'll be wondering "but how do I use it?"

      Take my comments seriously, friends, because this is
      a major, major problem with plr/mrr sites and is not often
      convincingly addressed.

      Until you talk to lots of real people on the phone (I used
      to do network marketing prospecting) you don't realize
      how clueless people are in general about selling stuff
      online. Launching an info-products empire is a pretty
      intimidating thing. Most newbies just would like to know
      "can you show me a way a dummy like me can make some
      money?"

      Seriously. That's the way people think.
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  • Profile picture of the author Andrew Gould
    The headline's a bit too wordy and my BS detector goes off at 'Instantly Profit', if you're going to make a big claim you need to provide proof straightaway.

    'As seen on...' Does anyone fall for that?

    The video didn't do anything at all for me.

    Your English is good but a bit too formal. And you can break up most of your paragraphs to make them easier to read.

    The 'Yes' graphic doesn't appear to be particularly relevant.

    The layout is very busy and far too cramped, get some more white space in there. Consider spreading out your testimonials a bit more, or you could use them as a wall on the right hand side. Don't call them testimonials.

    There's a bit of a jump from the '7 Myths' section to the 'How our..' section. You need to explain what PLR is (if you're aiming at beginners maybe don't even use the term), then explain why it's so good and then explain that you're offering the best PLR service available, and why.

    The 'Here's What We Currently Offer' section doesn't seem to match with what you've said before.

    Hope some of this is of use.
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