Good or Bad? I want some critique on this site.

Yeah, your grammar throughout needs work. I understand
that Engloish probably isn't your first language. I think
visitors, on seeing your picture, will forgive you for your
style of writing - what they won't do is take action
on stuff they don't understand.

In your bullets your writing slips again and again into the passive
voice... where the verb is something done to the subject.
I know that sounds obscure - which is why it's hard for most
people to grasp. Also there are a lot of infinitives. I can't
tell you exactly why this is bad - but I do know for sure
that writing a lot of infinitives adds a lot of words.

If I were writing with passive voice and infinitive the above
would be more like:
"Also there appear to be a lot of infinitives. I can't
tell you exactly why this is thought to be bad - but I do
know for sure that to be writing a lot of infinitives is
thought to add a lot of words."

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your headline: "A Quick and Easy Way For YOU to Find Profitable Niche Market That Forces 89% Of People Want to Buy Your Information Product Instantly!"

can easily be rewritten:
"Find Super-Profitable Secret Niche Markets Where 8 in 10 People Are Desperate To Buy!"

A lot of writers want to load up their headlines with these buzzwords -
quick, easy, profit, force, etc... but it's a good idea understand that your
credibility is ZERO with your visitor and the more cliched, and over-the-top
your claims are (89% ??? golly) the harder you'll have to work to prove it.

We go a little further with the headline, simplifying the message even more:
headline - "Secret Niche Markets"

sub -"How to find the secret hot-spot niches and profit in them."



body - "In any marketplace are pockets of intense buyer motivation. You will see
buyer desperation in some secret niches where 89% of you website visitors
will be seriously motivated to buy."

That's a much more credible claim IMO... even though saying that you
can convert at 89% is quite a stretch.

There are no cash-sucking vaccuum cleaners in my copy, no "forcing" people
to open their wallets, no smoke and mirrors.

Many writers turn-up the "buying triggers" way too brazenly - which undermines
the credibility of the copy. Great copy seldom comes off as having a transparent
agenda to sell. Yet a lot of the IM copy I see these days is very heavy-handed.

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"Discover The Truth about Human Nature and How To Choose a Profitable Hungry Market Without Spending Any Single Penny"

This is pretty good. How can we make this more credible and get more action?

"Get the Free Report and You'll Discover The Simple Rules Of Human Buying Behavior."

"You'll also get the information you need to to zero-in on a hungry market - without risking
a single penny! Here's what you'll get..."