Copy Critique Request: Fat Loss Product
I've just stepped in the weight loss niche by establishing a partnership with a fitness expert.
We created this product The Diet Ultimatum. However because it's the first time we work in this niche, we don't have much experience.
So if you've worked in weight loss niche for sometimes now, please give us some comments on our sales page:
=> The Diet Ultimatum - Most Advanced Weight Loss Program
There is a video version and a text version. Comments on both are welcomed.
Thanks much,
Stephen
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