Need Critique of website design email pitch
Hi,
Ive heard so many great things about this forum so I decided to come here for some help. Im setting up a small web design business and would like a critique of my email that i send out to people (mainly on craigslist) that want web design. Here it is:
Hello,
We are Geek Twist Designs, a small website firm . I saw your posting and know that my team can help. Unlike most web design companies, our work comes with a 100% money back guarantee. If you do not like our work, we will refund your money, no questions asked. I am that confident that my team and I will do a great job.
Please feel free to look at some of our past work:
{Websites here}
Heres who hires us:
-The individual who needs a site online that is of great quality and easily functional
- The company who needs a branded site that gets them leads. A site that can be easily changed if needed.
-The marketer who needs several sites set up at once, and wants a designer that understands SEO and why people buy.
If we are picked for this project, we will personally communicate with you via email/skype daily about the progress of your project, so that you can have as much control over the design process as you want. We are committed to the highest level of quality when it comes to everything we do, from communication, to design. Please email us with more specifics so we can get started making your idea a reality!
Yours in Success,
Danny
Geek Twist Designs
How can I improve on it?
Ive heard so many great things about this forum so I decided to come here for some help. Im setting up a small web design business and would like a critique of my email that i send out to people (mainly on craigslist) that want web design. Here it is:
Hello,
We are Geek Twist Designs, a small website firm . I saw your posting and know that my team can help. Unlike most web design companies, our work comes with a 100% money back guarantee. If you do not like our work, we will refund your money, no questions asked. I am that confident that my team and I will do a great job.
Please feel free to look at some of our past work:
{Websites here}
Heres who hires us:
-The individual who needs a site online that is of great quality and easily functional
- The company who needs a branded site that gets them leads. A site that can be easily changed if needed.
-The marketer who needs several sites set up at once, and wants a designer that understands SEO and why people buy.
If we are picked for this project, we will personally communicate with you via email/skype daily about the progress of your project, so that you can have as much control over the design process as you want. We are committed to the highest level of quality when it comes to everything we do, from communication, to design. Please email us with more specifics so we can get started making your idea a reality!
Yours in Success,
Danny
Geek Twist Designs
How can I improve on it?
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