HELP! Sales Page Review HELP!
Hi fellow Warriors.
Just launched this new site sometime ago and have had mixed results. Please check it our here:
Start a Lawn Care Business
So let me tell you the History. Launched this about a month ago (with a totally different sales page) had a few orders, a ton of clicks and a 90% bounce rate.
Then I switched to the latest sales page you see here and turned my ads back on. Clicks stayed consistent, sales increased and bounce rate decreased to 82%.... still high but reasonable. And the orders were good so I thought I was set.
After the first week of being up the page went cold, ice cold. Not an order for 10 days so I finally turned off the adwords campaign. I used to have a video at the top of the site (my business partner talking about how this page is going to change your life). He is 26, I'm 28... we thought the video might be what is making people bounce.... who wants to learn from a Young kid - so no video now and I'm thinking I'll turn my adwords back on. See how it goes
Just want some feedback and advice from my fellow warriors about my sales page to see what I can do to increase the sales.
Please give me your honest advice - I'd really appreciate it. I'd do the same for you.
Thanks,
Adam
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