This is not meant for advert (already in WFH) STRICTLY Critique please...
Since I am a newbie here, just wanna get some feed back to tweek my 1st ever sales letter here on WF would be cool & interesting to see yall expert critiques and refining feedback, THANKS! If any errors you can check it in my sig, again.....
Vyctor~
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But for more samples from our Archive just send an email to: mr.victor.bo@gmail.com Our former partner & current Warrior Member, Fred Jones shall back this up 100% upon request with Warrior Testimonials. Our Triple-Seal's Proudly Placedto Challenge YOU to SEE & Believe Yourself! Why VYCTORIOUS WRYTERS* won't just Land YOU on #1 SEO THRONE + GOOGLE SITES will Shoe Shine YOU!
Andrew Gould
Direct Response Copywriting
Always looking for badass direct-response copywriters. PM me if we don't know each other and you're looking for work.