My first product, my first sales page... please critique.
I'm fairly new to IM. Started in Jan/2010. I'm able to get sales, build lists, etc... I think I am ready for the next step. I am making my own product. The website is built, and its pending within ClickBank...
But I'm horrid at writing. I'm not overly creative or sensitive - when I try to use emotional appeal... it just sounds forced.
Do any of you have any suggestion for my sales page? Any help would be much appreciated :S
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