Critique of email copy:
I'm promoting an eBook that shows them how to maximize their profits and avoid common costly mistakes and pitfalls.
The purpose of the email is to encourage the member to visit the sales page.
Any critique gratefully received!
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Subject: Maximize Your Courier Profits!
Hey {membername},
As a new member of (MYWEBSITEGOESHERE.com) we’re sure that you’re keen to start making money with your new freelance delivery company. Our staff are working 24/7 to bring you lots of shipments to bid on and we’re expecting a surge in the coming weeks thanks to a vigorous new marketing campaign.
One of the things you’ll be asking yourself is “Just How Much Money Can I Make From This?”
The answer…A LOT OF MONEY…provided you do things RIGHT.
We see many new drivers who keep making the same mistakes with their new business, and miss out on a huge amount of potential profits. These are mistakes that can easily be fixed with the right knowledge.
To help you maximize your courier profits we’ve come up with a quick-start guide that will show you how to make the most money as a freelance courier driver, and we’ll also show you how to quickly and easily side-step common pitfalls that can be costly, both in money and time.
Our guide is hands-down the best on the market, and 100% guaranteed to help you succeed in your new venture.
Pick up your copy of “Quick Start Guide to Building Your Courier & Shipping Company!” today, and enjoy the benefits!
To Pick up your guide simply CLICK HERE, or copy and paste the link below into your browser:
LINK GOES HERE
Thanks and Happy Shipping!
The CitizenShipper Team
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