Critique and suggestions for site banners - No sales copy just yet
I am currently getting a copywriter who I found at a steal on the WSO forum to write my copy (not the $47 one LOL). I will revive this thread for further critique when it's done.
However, I would like to get your opinion on my website banners. At the moment, there is a fair bit of text which conveys a great message, however I think I could simplify it down into fewer words.
The site is lostwarriorguide.com
This is not promotional at all, there is no way to sign up either.
I have covered several bases with banner 1, my first priority focusing on NON hype.
The second banner has a little bit of information about how we can help.
The third has got bulletpoints of what exactly we offer
The fourth has focus on us providing great customer service.
Do you think a more graphical, and less informational approach for the graphics would work best? Or as little text as possible?
The part where it says "test test...." is all going to have a fully formatted sales letter in it shortly.
Would like information on how you would approach this template (it's too late to change now).
Look forward to your comments and suggestions.
- Dean
Andrew Gould
Always looking for badass direct-response copywriters. PM me if we don't know each other and you're looking for work.