Partially done with a rough draft... your thoughts so far?
Maybe I shouldn't bother, but I was excited to get my first client. That is, until they showed me their product.
First of all... they have no proof/credibility elements that I can use.
They've told me that they can't use any testimonials at this point anyway because clickbank doesn't allow it on new products because they can't verify sales (is this true?)
To boot, they don't even want to use their name or picture.
All of this, combined with a few other things... has really kept me from being too excited about it all.
Just doesn't feel right. And it's hard to get excited about a product when the owner doesn't even seem to be.
So I'm not sure yet, but given that I could use the experience regardless... I decided to write about it for practice anyway.
Aside from the fact that it's not finished, I know it needs work...
I'm trying to be conversational, trying to side with potential prospects, etc. But when I read it out loud it sounds kind of flat. I'm going to try to add a little more emotion when I go back to edit.
Am I right that it is sounding too much like an article?
I also realize that I should probably highlight the benefits of the product as I am doing with the topic of affiliate marketing itself, but...
I just wanted to build up to the actual offer first and THEN obviously touch on them [product benefits].
Thoughts?
PS - If you were just starting out, would you bother to take on this sort of project? Proof and credibility are very important and there's nothing available for me to add it into the letter.
PPS - Hopefully .doc format works ok. I wanted to use that because it retains the little bit of text that I highlighted.
Thanks!
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