Sales Page Review?
I'm wondering if I could impose upon your generosity to critique my sales page here.
A bit of background is that the target market is women who were raised by mothers who have Narcissisistic Personality Disorder, and the vendor is herself one of these women. There are references in the letter to the acronym DONMs (standing for Daughters of Narcissistic Mothers), and the target market will understand those.
Thank you in advance for any feedback and advice you can give me.
(I know my 'buy now' buttons aren't centred, and also there are too many line returns in places - XSitePro playing up on me, and I need to contact them to fix this.)
All best, and thanks again, Tracy
Here's the link to the page again.
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