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Sales video review

by Etienne
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Hey guys,

I'm currently on the process of completely rebuilding my website. Parts of it are done.

I created a sales video for my entry-level product. I would like to have your review.
http://www.shamanicseduction.com/aut...seduction.html

On the new website, there will also be a concise product description, list of problems solved and list of solutions, as well as a list of bonuses. For now I want review on the video only.
#review #sales #video
  • Profile picture of the author romolo
    hey, I watched the video, I think is alright and the message is clear, but maybe you could improve it with some colors in the background or some images, and seen that you're talking about a sensitive topic you may want to add some soft music low volume...

    Good luck
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  • Profile picture of the author Vincenzo Oliva
    Too bad you don't have an audio editor you could remove the echo and the backround static.
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  • Profile picture of the author Daniel Scott
    Etienne,

    I get French (Canadian French, anyway) is your main language... but there was one particular issue that bugged me through this video.

    The word women - we pronounce it "WHIM-ENN". Also, there's a few points where you say something like "I met beautiful woman" instead of "I met a beautiful woman."

    Minor, I know, but it bugged me.

    Now... as far as the sales video... I think it's a little bland.

    You need more curiosity... a stronger hook... and a bigger USP.

    Plus you need a headline at the top of the page.

    So ask yourself this...

    How are you different... and why would people buy your stuff over anyone else?

    Then you need to hammer that from the first minute of your video.

    Finally... you're missing some crucial stuff for an infoproduct. Where are the bullet points? The testimonials? The strong close (you don't really have one at all at the moment).

    Kind regards,

    -Dan
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    • Profile picture of the author Etienne
      Originally Posted by romolo

      and seen that you're talking about a sensitive topic you may want to add some soft music low volume...
      Sensitive and controversial? That's nothing yet If someone can't handle this, then my product is most likely not for him haha

      Originally Posted by Vincenzo Oliva

      Too bad you don't have an audio editor you could remove the echo and the backround static.
      I do have an audio editor, I could do a noise reduction. I didn't do it because I found the noise to be low already.

      Originally Posted by Daniel Scott

      How are you different... and why would people buy your stuff over anyone else?
      What I do is extremely unique and those who are ready for it recognize it. The branding of my new website will express that uniqueness more clearly so it doesn't have to be on every sales page.

      Originally Posted by Daniel Scott

      Finally... you're missing some crucial stuff for an infoproduct. Where are the bullet points? The testimonials? The strong close (you don't really have one at all at the moment).
      I have a list of benefits and solutions. I have a list of great testimonials. These will be on the new website.

      How could I make the close stronger?

      One powerful thing I read today is "sell like you like to be sold to". I like to be sold with solid and deep content presented in a clear and precise way without selling pressure or tactics.
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      • Profile picture of the author Etienne
        Actually here's the page content I'm sending to my website designer. The testimonials will be added into it.

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        Do you want to live with authenticity, empowerment and freedom? Do you sometimes get stuck in women's friend zone? Do you experience too much drama and not enough passion in your relationships with women? Authentic Attraction will guide you to awaken your intuitive and creative side to connect with women on four different levels. It comes with a bonus track to master your fears and anxieties. This audio program is a must for anyone who wants to dramatically improve their dating life by bringing more physical and emotional intimacy. The precision and clarity of the message, the lovely woman's voice and the energy in it led many men to shed tears of liberation.

        The content of Authentic Attraction and Sexual Magnetism is completely different and complimentary.

        Here are some of the problems addressed in this audio program:
        • Lack of self-confidence
        • Dating difficulties
        • Being stuck in women's friend zone
        • Loneliness
        • Depression
        • Lack of passion
        • Relationship drama
        • Power struggles
        • Repression of femininity
        • Repression of intuitive brain
        • High divorce rate
        • Fears and anxieties

        Here are some of the solutions discussed in Authentic Attraction
        • Connect with women on four levels
        • Be your authentic self
        • Develop self-confidence
        • Understand polarity
        • Take responsibility
        • Accept her flaws
        • Compensate for her weaknesses
        • Have a strong sexual presence
        • Life with relationship freedom
        • Surround yourself with respectful people
        • Experience synergy in your relationships
        • Experience physical and emotional intimacy
        • Awaken your intuitive side
        • Experience well-being and carefreeness
        • Understand love and emotions

        This is clearly out of the seduction community which is about taking. This is the foundation of the attraction community which is about giving.

        Bonuses:

        #1 Authentic Attraction comes with a bonus track about mastering your fears and anxieties, which has been reported as being worth the price of the entire program by itself.

        #2 Support is important for your progress. You will gain access to the Shamanic Attraction private forum where you can share your thoughts, experiences and breakthroughs with like-minded people.

        #3 I will take my personal time to answer three of your most burning questions by email.

        #4 Some people experience challenges such as psychic attacks or energetic instabilities. Some experience weird things they cannot talk with anyone. I can help you understand these experiences and I will not let you down. Let me know if you ever experience energetic crisis or instabilities and I will help you go through it.


        One-line description:
        Bring authenticity, empowerment and freedom to your dating life with Authentic Attraction.


        365-days money-back guarantee
        I am so confident Authentic Attraction will have a huge impact in your life that if it doesn't meet your expectations, send me an email within 365 days and I will refund your money right away without asking questions. This is a risk-free investment.
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      • Profile picture of the author Daniel Scott
        Originally Posted by Etienne View Post

        What I do is extremely unique and those who are ready for it recognize it. The branding of my new website will express that uniqueness more clearly so it doesn't have to be on every sales page.
        As a guy who makes his clients lots of money, I can tell you that's a very dangerous (and often incorrect) assumption to be making.

        You have to spell out why you're different. "Branding" just doesn't cut it...

        One powerful thing I read today is "sell like you like to be sold to". I like to be sold with solid and deep content presented in a clear and precise way without selling pressure or tactics.
        I don't like to be sold to at all; but as a salesperson, I realize that's a very bad tactic if I want to put food on the table.

        As Zig Ziglar put it... timid salespeople have skinny children.

        Pressure (scarcity, a strong close [you don't even HAVE one right now] and other stuff) is what makes people buy today... instead of never.

        You're welcome to ignore the accumulated sales wisdom of the ages if you wish... but unless you think you're smarter than Halbert, Ogilvy, Schwartz etc... I don't think it's a good starting point.

        -Dan
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        • Profile picture of the author Etienne
          I have removed the background noise and uploaded the video on YouTube. Here is the new version.

          Originally Posted by Daniel Scott

          As a guy who makes his clients lots of money, I can tell you that's a very dangerous (and often incorrect) assumption to be making.

          You have to spell out why you're different. "Branding" just doesn't cut it...
          I talk about what makes me unique a lot on the video. If it doesn't stand out for you, tell me more about what you think about it.

          The close could definitely be improved. Any suggestions?
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  • Profile picture of the author RickDuris
    Hi Etienne,

    About the biggest piece of advice I can give you is your piece is very structured, analytical and precise.

    But at the same time, it really lacks the emotion I think you need to convey. It just seems too intellectual.

    You're almost detached about the subject.

    Now that maybe one of the things that makes your work special or unique, but when you're trying to promote a product like this you've got to stir up the emotions.

    What's it like to be lonely--even in the presence of others?

    Or maybe what's it like to have a hot girl on your arm, and not really being able to connect with her?

    It's Saturday night and you're at the local bar or hang out. What's it like to be one of the only men not talking or dancing with a woman?

    What's it like to go out on one, or two or maybe three dates, thinking you've both had a good time... It's the end of the night. You've walked her to her door... only to discover she only wants to be friends...

    [Sigh.]

    Give real life examples they can see themselves in. Stir up that pain of loneliness and frustration and not knowing how to resolve a bit. Agitate. But allude to a solution all along the way. Then give them that success-certain solution which they'd be a fool not to take advantage of.

    - Rick Duris
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