Weak Landing page - Looking for some Reviews
I have just launched a membership site for geopolitical news and intelligence (i know it sounds a little dull)
The site has been live for 10 days and there are now 60 subscribers, but i think the landing page is pretty poor. The copy you see on there is what i have picked up from a book i read a while back and by looking at other member sites out there.
This is the main landing page I have:
http://www.globalintelligencereport....sional-Level-1
Also the homepage really doesn't sell much. It lists all 3 of our services and i think we should just focus on the main and cheapest one (which is the only one people are signing up for) - then we upsell to subscribers. Here is a link to the homepage:
http://www.globalintelligencereport.com/
We will be adding video shortly and a 7 day free trial.
The problem is that this audience is pretty sophisticated - we can't promise sensational things like 10,000% gains - we are basically a very sophisticated news service - similar to Stratfor, but without the US bias and dodgy analysis.
Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated as I really want to get this site rolling.
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