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Please critique my sales page design

by kizio
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Hi all, I've just started getting into the business of online marketing and have decided to take some action. I've designed the following landing page/squeeze page and am in the process of talking to a web designer to get it up and running however I need some advice as to whether some elements would work

This just the design and not a working site

Sales/Squeeze page

As I'm no good at copy writing I will be outsourcing all the writing and use this as a template for either a squeeze page or a landing page.

Thanks in advance
#critique #design #page #sales
  • Profile picture of the author geegel
    It looks pretty good. Still, I think that you should add an "Add to cart" button immediately below the video. Also, I see that you are using popups. Most browsers block them. I'd suggest to use a float ad instead.

    Hope this helps.

    Best regards,
    George
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    • Profile picture of the author kizio
      Originally Posted by geegel View Post

      It looks pretty good. Still, I think that you should add an "Add to cart" button immediately below the video. Also, I see that you are using popups. Most browsers block them. I'd suggest to use a float ad instead.

      Hope this helps.

      Best regards,
      George
      I thought about placing an add to cart there however it will depend on whether I'm using it to collect emails or sell a product. It wont be based on pop ups its how it will look through graphics, though using a float ad is a good, thanks
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  • Profile picture of the author we_got_tops
    I really like it. All the graphics look really sharp and it's a good progression of elements. A minor thought: your sales headline as is doesn't really stand out from the background too strongly; might be hard for some to read.
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  • Profile picture of the author LiveWireMarketing
    I Love it. Only suggestion is : after you put in all of your content - The "add to cart" buttons may overwhelm customers. There are so many. They need to be spaced far apart, but your content may do this.

    You need to scrutinize it after your done as a customer not as a webmaster and see if you are bombarding customers and viewers to much.

    But the colors are perfect, I love the layout, it is going extremely well
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