Can you review my salespage(spanish)

What kind of review do you want? about graphics? copywriting? Marketing strategy?

Maybe you can give more information about what are you trying to do or sell.
About the headline: this have to be something that captures people attention quickly:

For example i see you are selling a coaching program. So, you want people get some results, of course there is a change in their lifes, but in what area?

Maybe you can focus in the financial, in the health, others spiritual levels, etc.

The most specific are your market, the more money you are going to make. Your headline have to be really focused in the main goal of your program.

There is no such thing like "make everything you want in life" or "Achieve all your goals". Take a look at the best motivational speakers an authors and see what are they doing, in what area are they focusing, you have to tell all your customers what are they going to achieve and get exactly after finish your coaching program. And you need to say it quickly.

The people are always looking for an specific outcome, if you can figure out, what kind of outcome are they looking for and give to them, then you are going to make money. Don't try to sell to everybody in just one product, it's bettet to have several focused products. Make your homw work and your reasearch, ask people what they want and give to them.


Hope this helps.