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I have viewed several of the great photographs within your website, your blog also and would like to offer you the opportunity to present 26 pieces of your best work in a video I would like to show you - this is not your average video.
As I am sure you may well know, webmasters only have a few seconds to capture the interest and imagination of a visitor to our website, Facebook page or Youtube before they leave.
This is why online video is the fastest growing medium in history, as it engages the potential clients to interact and feel more involved. This brings about emotion and a feeling of connection which very often leads to increased conversion rates.
You can view the video here: TechSmith | Screencast.com, online video sharing, Photographic Memory(HDV) (view in full screen).
I have included some default images to give you a feel of how your own work would fit into your video. I can edit all of the text to fit your own name for branding and also add in your contact details as required such as website address and contact number.
There is another video I have which is here: TechSmith | Screencast.com, online video sharing, Wedding Photography
I was initially going to be offering this video as a service to newlyweds as a digital photo album to remember their wedding by, however I think it would be highly effective as a tool or yourself. See, you can optimise a video for specific online keyword phrases and then brand the video to you, allow me to explain Tom.
The video as I am sure you can see, is a story book that I can edit to be customised to you and your business. I have been doing internet marketing for over 4 years now and with my knowledge, I can optimise the video for certain keywords such as "wedding photographer London".
That phrase in particular is typed into Google on average 6,600 times / month.
The more optimised your video is for those keywords and other similar ones, the more views the video will get such as the following video I found which was uploaded 5 months ago on youtube:
I don't own that video but I am sure you can see the importance of distributing engaging videos on the web.
Did you know Youtube is the second biggest search engine in the world, receiving over 2 billion views per day? There will be people typing in "wedding photographer London" into Youtube rather than Google - people love video.
I truly believe you are missing out without having a fantastic video which is positioned all over the web where it can be seen. It is also something which is often shared through Facebook as a type of "I was there" or a "this is our photographer" social statement.
How many extra customers do you think you would need to make a video like this worthwhile Tom?
If you would like to discuss this further, then I very much look forward to answering any questions you may have.
If this is something you would like to start as soon as possible with Christmas approaching, I can add the images to the video in any order you wish, just order the file names as "image 1" etc and I will add them in that order. The text can be changed to literally anything you like so that's not a problem either.
Please note that rendering these high quality videos will take about 16 hours or so. I can format them in .mp4 for faster streaming.
Again, I look forward to hearing from you.
Best Regards,
Steve Holmes
What do you guys think, what needs to be changed?
Thx for any feedback
Omar Khafagy
Administrator of www.CopywritingBoard.com
Omar Khafagy
Administrator of www.CopywritingBoard.com