Site copy critique please..
would any of you kindly ladies and gents have a look at the copy on my revamped site and tell me what you think.
The site is here: SEO
Just to add that I will be adding some testimonials from a number of customers, I'm just trying to get them all together first, and I'll be adding a lot more free "how to" type guides on there as well.
The money back guarantee is totally genuine, we want to dissassociate ourselves from the many shady seo companies that take money and deliver nothing - you've got to have confidence in your own abilities, right?
The new copy went live about 3 weeks ago, and I reckon our number of enquiries has increased by a factor of 10 - but that's not saying much, it was pretty dismal before
The site previously was far too "technical" - all nuts and bolts and no benefits, but I can't help feel it could still be improved much more.
All helpful comments will be very gratefully received.
Thanks,
Dave
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