Intellect Vs Emotion...Which Will You Use?

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You see countless examples of copy across all mediums, not just on the internet
where the author tries to persuade and influence using intellect rather than emotion.

Intellect should be used to reinforce, not be the main component of the
copy. Otherwise you feel like you're reading a stats or reference book!

Even the most well constructed intellectual copy won't have the same
effect and success as one based on emotion. That's why they teach you
to write at Grade 9 level or lower, because you're targeting emotion
not intellect. (For the record, this was written at Grade 4 level)

How often do you make a decision because you have a gut feeling
or because it just feels right? That´s your emotion taking charge.
And then your intellect comes into play to justify the decision you´ve made.

So when writing sales copy, you need to win their heart first and then
their mind will follow.

Learn to use verbs as much as possible rather than just filling your copy
with adjectives.

Sure, descriptive words can paint a great picture, but
doing words place your subject directly in that picture making the
experience much more personal and the message so much more powerful.

Do you want to hear about all the technical components and specifications
of a car? Or would you rather hear how you'll turn heads when you drive
down the street, the wind through your hair as you cruise the freeway
with the top down?

Even those who love the technical aspect of cars will be more inclined to
take action when the see themselves in the picture.

So when it comes to potential customers, you can either talk to their
mind or more importantly, talk to their heart.

Intellect Vs Emotion...which will you use?
#emotionwhich #intellect
  • Profile picture of the author Vincenzo Oliva
    There's 4 areas I focus on:
    The Head- intellect & emotion
    The Heart- passion (most profitable)
    The Gut - instincts
    The Groin - illogical and unpredictable

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  • Profile picture of the author russells
    I always use emotion in sales copy. It's emotion that triggers people to click the buy button if the product solves a problem that's getting in the way of that persons life.

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    • Profile picture of the author ARSuarez
      Sell with emotion - justify with logic.

      "Man, I would look so awesome in that red Ferrari. That ****ing neighbor of mine would look like a chump in his new Lexus. Ha! What does some ****ty Lexus have on a Ferrari. A RED Ferrari. My favorite color, and a beautiful car. And you know... I've been wanting one for a long time anyway. Plus, with the kids getting bigger and driving their own cars, I don't have to use the ol' boat anymore. Now, I can have a nice personal car and won't have to worry about the kids wrecking it. And it's only $XXX a month? That's a heckuva deal. I haven't seen a bargain like that on Ferrari in a while..."

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      PS. That entire block is almost entirely extrapolated fro Vic Schwab's "How To Write A Good Advertisement."

      There is no choice - You sell on anything but emotion, even to Engineers, and you're going to bomb.
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  • Profile picture of the author Jess Alexander
    I always consider what the prospect is already feeling. What are the burning needs/desires/fears/lusts/etc that are already there. I try to make the prospect feel what they might not even yet realize they feel. And let them feel it hard.

    Intellect comes into play in areas like discussing a price. The prospect thinks, "that's a lot of money to spend!"

    That's an area where emotion and intellect are so woven together and intertwined.

    So you get them to think about how they'll feel.

    For example, from my favorite sales letter ever, by Alexis Dawes,

    So before you start thinking that $97 is too much to spend on my time-tested advice, I want you to carefully consider the far greater costs it takes to write several crappy books that don't generate enough to even repay you for the time you spent writing them.
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  • Profile picture of the author gjabiz
    Originally Posted by coykiesaol View Post


    So when it comes to potential customers, you can either talk to their
    mind or more importantly, talk to their heart.

    Intellect Vs Emotion...which will you use?
    Anytime a person makes sweeping blanket statements, there should be a qualifier...

    YES, emotional appeals are IMPORTANT...but using both, in a proper sequence, in a manner which suits the reader and their interest in the product...should be taken into consideration.

    To answer your question,

    I'll use BOTH, put together in a Tested and Proven RESULTS based way.

    Emotional appeal, coupled with logic, gut, instinct, NLP, TCA, and with a specific result clearly identified...are Awesome Combinations.

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  • Profile picture of the author AlanCarr
    Yep, as G said, both.

    There's a 3rd component in DIRECT response selling.

    "Do you want to hear about all the technical components and specifications
    of a car? Or would you rather hear how you'll turn heads when you drive
    down the street, the wind through your hair as you cruise the freeway
    with the top down?"

    I'm afraid that's a really poor example. People start car shopping with a pretty good idea of the specs they NEED.

    If you're going to be towing a boat you're not interested, at all, in anything other than XXX horsepower. If you can't drive a stick-shift (or just hate them) you NEED to know if it's available in automatic.

    You qualifiy with features and specifications, you sell on emotions, and justify with logic.

    Miss any of those and you lose sales.

    Of course the order can change depending on the product and market...

    You raise a valid point, that most people forget the emotional side but no, you can't rely on the mind following after the heart. That's called "buyer's remorse", "refunds" and "chargebacks".



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    • Profile picture of the author Devid Farah
      I agree with what angel has said - "Sell with emotion - justify with logic."

      You have to hit an emotional hot-button within the first few seconds, follow that up quickly by offering a promise, and then justify how the promise would make your reader's life easier.
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  • Profile picture of the author HorseStall
    I think it depends on the product. If you have a product that saves time and money then intellect, if you have a product that produces the "warm and fuzzies" then make an emotional appeal.
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  • Profile picture of the author RickDuris
    I'm going to share a secret today.

    Try this in your next piece:

    1. Make the offer based upon DESIRE (emotion).

    2. Then make the offer again, based upon LOGIC or as you say "Intellect".

    3. Then make the offer one more time based upon FEAR (emotion). (Fear can be implemented as scarcity or time-sensitive or whatever.)

    This way, you are covering all the bases.

    When you watch the infomercials, that's the sequence.

    - Rick Duris

    PS: This works well for video scripts.
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  • Profile picture of the author JanPat
    Using emotion is a basic staple, but it can also be a crutch. You don't always need to tug on emotions if you really know your target reader (but that's just my opinion based on my past copy experiences).
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  • Profile picture of the author Zentech
    Emotion first and foremost, always - but ethically. Those who are expert in psychology and behavioral button-pushing can essentially force a sale on a certain sort of prospect, if they so choose. Skilled (but ethically dubious) copywriters capable of this are pretty much the only reason some of the garbage products out there ever sell. Would anybody really ever buy "Instant Billions" or that sort of thing otherwise?

    So yeah - if I'm selling a good product in which I actually believe, then emotion. It won't be hard because I'll just use my own excitement about the product and go from there, rather than making a cold and calculated effort to get you chomping at the bit to buy rubbish. I could do that (as can all decent writers) - but I choose not to. Thus, I don't work as much as some, but that's totally fine by me.
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  • Profile picture of the author mikelong
    You need both emotion and logic to make a sale.

    I begin with emotion.
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